Moment In Time

In Te Ngahere  (our class) this term we have been writing about te Ngahere (the bush). We  had to write a piece of writing called a moment in time. When we were writing we had to describe what we could see, hear, feel and smell. I think I could have done a bit more writing and added more ideas. I also I really did well at explaining what I did. here is my writing

Kererus singing beautiful melodies as they fly delicately around, that smell of wet bark flowing into everyone's noses, long big kauri tree waving to a kowhai tree, a moving in the bush, big widow spider slowly crawling on the kauri tree, raging wind flowing through everyone's hair, big kauri tree waving to people,