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Tuesday, April 4, 2017

Isaiah is poem

on Tuesday me and my class did poems about metaphors and I going to show you mine hope you like it.


Isaiah is a Lamborghini zooming cross the road.

Isaiah is a sky tower that sparkles in the night.

Isaiah is a clumsy circus clown that makes everyone laugh.

Isaiah is a pancake that is floppy and flexible.

Isaiah is a cote that is stuffed with cotton candy.


thank you for listening to my poem.



2 comments:

  1. Kia ora Isaiah, what a great poem, full of interesting metaphors. What was it part of? Why did we write these poems? What do you think you did well? What could you have done better? Don't forget to add all that information in every post :) I look forward to your next posts and finding out more your learning.

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  2. Hi Isaiah it is a very good poem remember to write what you could do well and what you could do better.

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