In Te Maunga we have been doing a writing goal sheets⬇ we have done spelling, punctuation, sentence structure, vocabulary, idea and organisation, I need to do better in my vocabulary because I need to put punctuation in, if you don't no went a writing goal sheet here it is⬇
2017 writing goal sheet
Surface Features
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Deeper Features
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Spelling
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Punctuation
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Sentence Structure
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Vocabulary
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Idea
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Organisation
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Where am I?
copy and paste the definition from above
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R4
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R4
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R3
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R3
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R3
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R4
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I spell most essential
list words correctly and attempt some difficult words using spelling rules.
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I use capital letters, and sentence endings correctly for most of my sentences and some other punctuation correctly.
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I am beginning to write sentences of different lengths-simple, compound and complex sentences.
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I can write a lot of simple words and some extra words to add detail. Noun / verbs / adjectives.
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I have many simple ideas on the topic with no detail.
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I put my ideas in order or groups and am attempting paragraphs. I use clear pronouns.
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How do I know?
Give some examples from your writing of why you think you are in that box
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I think i'm in R4 because I can spell some words (like, swimming,exhausted
Sprinting,careful, and those are the words I can spell.
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I think i’m R4 because I can put all my Capitals, full stop Commas, in the right places but sometimes I forget to put them in.
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I think i’m R3 because I put in some complex sentence And some
Compound sentence
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I think i’m in R3 because I can put interesting words but I don’t put metaphors and similes.
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I think i’m R3 because I have ideas but I don’t really have any detail.
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I think i’m R4 because I put in paragraphs in my stories but my sentences aren't long
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What next?
What are your next learning steps?
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I am going to keep trying to spell more bigger words and more interesting words.
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I need to use more full stops capital letters exclamation mark
Comers and speech marks in my stories
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I need to put more complex sentence
And some more compound sentence
In my stories
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I need to put more similes and metaphors and more interesting words in my stories.
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I need to put more detail to my scents
And put more ideas into my writing.
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I need to put longer sentences in my paragraphs
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Hi Isaiah, I like the way you put in what your goal of your writing you where very detailed when you where explaining your writing goals. I think you forgot to say what you did well what you could work on, you said if you don't know went it is it is here so it does't make sense i think you meant to say where not went.
ReplyDeleteHi stilly i like the way you expand your goal setting shit it is really good you should put anther blog on
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