In Te Ngahere we have been learning to do metaphors
so we made a poem. I really like doing this because we got to write cool and funny metaphors I think
so we made a poem. I really like doing this because we got to write cool and funny metaphors I think
I need to work on doing more poems because I haven't done enough. This is also my first draft.
Isaiah is a cheetah zooming through the grass.
Isaiah is a monkey that doesn't listen
Isaiah is a pair of yeezy thats flash and slick
Isaiah is a troll that gets angry easily
Isaiah is a sky tower that shined in the night
Kia ora Isaiah.S I think you have done really well with your poem, I liked were you said Isaiah is a monkey that never listens. Maybe you could of extended your poems to add more detail.
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