Writing Goal Sheet

In Te Maunga we have been doing a writing goal sheets⬇ we have done spelling, punctuation, sentence structure, vocabulary, idea and organisation, I need to do better in my vocabulary because I need to put punctuation in, if you don't no went a writing goal sheet here it is⬇

2017 writing goal sheet

	Surface Features			Deeper Features
	Spelling	Punctuation	Sentence Structure	Vocabulary	Idea		Organisation
Where am I? copy and paste the definition from above	R4	R4	R3	R3	R3		R4
	I spell most essential list words correctly and attempt some difficult words using spelling rules.	I use capital letters, and sentence endings correctly for most of my sentences and some other punctuation correctly.	I am beginning to write sentences of different lengths-simple, compound and complex sentences.	I can write a lot of simple words and some extra words to add detail. Noun / verbs / adjectives.	I have many simple ideas on the topic with no detail.		I put my ideas in order or groups and am attempting paragraphs. I use clear pronouns.
How do I know? Give some examples from your writing of why you think you are in that box	I think i'm in R4 because I can spell some words (like, swimming,exhausted Sprinting,careful, and those are the words I can spell.	I think i’m R4 because I can put all my Capitals, full stop   Commas, in the right places but sometimes I forget to put them in.	I think i’m R3 because I put in some complex sentence And some Compound sentence	I think i’m in R3 because I can put interesting words but I don’t put metaphors and similes.	I think i’m R3 because I have ideas but I don’t really have any  detail.		I think i’m R4 because I put in paragraphs in my stories but my sentences aren't long
What next? What are your next learning steps?	I am going to keep trying to spell more bigger words and more interesting words.	I need to use more full stops capital letters   exclamation mark Comers and  speech marks in my stories	I need to put more complex sentence And some more compound sentence In my stories	I need to put more similes and metaphors and more interesting words in my stories.	I need to put more detail to my scents And put more ideas into my writing.		I need to put longer sentences in my paragraphs

I going to work on my Sentence Structure  and my Vocabulary.

Get NZ Writing Challenge

3 weeks ago In te maunga we have been working on these poems we had to get them finish by friday. when we were finished we were so happy that we got thow with it, we sent it to anther school called Te Horo, if you were wandering where the school is its in wellington when we got theres we . here is the card we made

Unpacking our Hoe

     In Te Maunga we have been working on our hoe. I have made a Storyboard that to show what hoe              means my hoe was whanaugatanga, I just want to say this took me 1 week, i'm so Sorry if you can't see        the words but I hope you like it.

Made with Storyboard That

Isaiah is poem

on Tuesday me and my class did poems about metaphors and I going to show you mine hope you like it.

Isaiah is a Lamborghini zooming cross the road.

Isaiah is a sky tower that sparkles in the night.

Isaiah is a clumsy circus clown that makes everyone laugh.

Isaiah is a pancake that is floppy and flexible.

Isaiah is a cote that is stuffed with cotton candy.

thank you for listening to my poem.